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Writer's pictureCollins k.k Boateng

The Whispering Willow And The Golden Feather

Updated: Dec 5

What problem do you seek to solve in your area? what impact are you making? read this short story to discover how a young beautiful girl went through the odds to bring joy to her village.

Once upon a time, a magnificent willow tree stood in a valley surrounded by emerald-green mountains.


magnificent willow tree stood in a valley surrounded by emerald-green mountains.

This was no ordinary tree; it was known as the Whispering Willow because its leaves sang soft melodies of wisdom and comfort to anyone who rested beneath its branches.


Villagers traveled far and wide to seek its counsel, but the tree would only share its secrets with those with kind hearts.




In the nearby village, there lived a young girl named Elara. She was recognized for her golden hair, her bright smile, and her passion for helping others.

Although Elara’s family was poor, she never allowed that to prevent her from sharing what little she had.

She often visited the Whispering Willow to listen to its songs and dream of adventures.

One day, while Elara was picking wildflowers near the tree, a stunning golden feather floated down from the sky.


She caught it in her hand, captivated by its brilliance. The Whispering Willow's voice danced in the breeze, saying, 

"The feather you hold is from the Phoenix of the Sky.

If you are brave enough to return it, your greatest wish will come true."

Elara’s heart raced with excitement. She had heard stories of the Phoenix, a magnificent bird that resided atop Cloudspire Mountain, a peak so high it touched the heavens.

Without a moment's hesitation, Elara embarked on her journey, guided by the whispers of the golden feather.

The journey was challenging.

She crossed roaring rivers, befriended a clever fox who helped her discover hidden paths and faced a fierce storm that nearly swept her away.

Yet, each time she stumbled, the feather glowed brighter, filling her with renewed strength.

At last, after days of climbing, she reached the peak of Cloudspire Mountain.

There, sitting on a throne of fire and light, was the Phoenix. Its feathers sparkled like molten gold, and its eyes shone with ancient wisdom.

Elara stood before the Phoenix, a creature of breathtaking beauty.




Its feathers glimmered in shades of gold, crimson, and amber, while its eyes held the wisdom of countless ages. As she approached, the golden feather in her hand quivered slightly.


Taking a deep breath, she knelt and raised the feather high. “Great Phoenix,” she said, her voice steady despite her awe, “I have traveled far to return this to you.”

The Phoenix studied her for a long moment before unfurling its magnificent wings.

Flames flickered along its feathers, casting a warm light over Elara. When it finally spoke, its voice was both melodic and powerful. 


"You are courageous, child and your heart is pure. Many would have kept this feather for themselves, seeking to harness its magic. Yet you returned it without greed or hesitation."

The Phoenix plucked another feather from its brilliant tail and offered it to Elara. This feather was unique—it glowed softly and radiated warmth. 

"This feather," the Phoenix continued, "is a gift. Make a wish, and it shall be granted.

But choose wisely, for the gift of the Phoenix is rare and precious."


Elara closed her eyes, reflecting on all she had experienced during her journey: the kindness of the fox, the strength she discovered within herself, and the hardships faced by her family back home. Finally, she whispered her wish.

“I wish for my village to thrive so that no one will go hungry or suffer again.”


The Phoenix cried triumphantly, and the feather in Elara’s hand dissolved into golden sparks.

These sparks swirled around her, gently lifting her off the mountain and carrying her back to her village.

Upon her arrival, everything had transformed.


Phoenix, a creature of unimaginable beauty. Its feathers shimmered with hues of gold, crimson, and amber, and its eyes burned with the wisdom of the ages

The once-barren fields were now vibrant with crops, the river flowed clear and teeming with fish, and the villagers stood with joy in their eyes. They rushed to welcome her, marveling at the miraculous change.




Questions

  1. What two moral lessons can you learn from this passage?

  2. Who has the golden feather?

  3. You are courageous and your heart is pure. Who made this statement?

  4. What was Elara's wish?

  5. List all the characters in the story?

  6. What type of story is this?

  7. Phoenix is................

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